>>40865469now see as a westerner [fetish] artist, I'm not fond of this image, either.
I've been practising with angles & perspectives lately, & I'm very fickle about my art.
Not saying I can do any better, but I find many things wrong with OP's image.
At some point, I'd like to do some fetish art with particular Pokégirls.
Something about that image, as an artist, really irritates me.
