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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:20:41 No.40933724 View View Reply Original Report

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This is a cockatiel line I designed, share your own too!

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:21:39 No.40933753 Report

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>>40933724
I like it, just doesnt change enough when it evolves

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:22:08 No.40933767 Report

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:22:45 No.40933782 Report

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>>40933724
>tfw electric/flying type cockatiel Pokémon doesn’t exist
I’d ALWAYS have that Pokémon on my team if it ever existed.

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:23:29 No.40933812 Report

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>>40933724

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:23:42 No.40933823 Report

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>>40933753
Yeah I designed it as a swellow sort of line. Small changes because it isn’t the ‘regional bird’ but rather a secondary.

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:24:45 No.40933854 Report

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This is my pokemon
He, uh, does things
His name is Gerald

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:25:26 No.40933869 Report

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>>40933854
I love him. 10/10 would use

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:42:43 No.40934293 Report

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>>40933724
you just took a cockatiel and gave its head pikachu colors.
still better than the sword/shield designs though.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:43:29 No.40934318 Report

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>>40933812

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:44:13 No.40934338 Report

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:45:58 No.40934390 Report

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>>40933823
Its doesnt change at all. It literally just gets bigger.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:50:01 No.40934499 Report

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>>40934390
It has small changes like it’s head wings and tail.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 15:52:53 No.40934569 Report

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>>40934499
Here's how to properly incorporate "small changes" akin to tailow/swellow.
Adding an extra line or feather is not enough to warrant an evolution.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:09:47 No.40934893 Report

Quoted By: >>40934926

>>40933724
That's literally just a normal cockatiel. Not very interesting, to be frank.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:11:18 No.40934926 Report

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>>40934893
whatever frank, it's still adroable

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:14:05 No.40934990 Report

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>>40934390

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:14:11 No.40934992 Report

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>>40934569
much better, more pokemon-like. although the big form is still just a normal cockatiel

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:16:03 No.40935030 Report

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Alright alright I’ll make some changes to them give me a few ^^

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:19:12 No.40935093 Report

Quoted By: >>40935251

I appreciate you posting your work ITT, but I must echo the sentiment already heard here. It is kind of just a cockatiel, but drawn with Pokemon-esque stylings.
When designing a Pokemon, you need to start with a theme, and that theme can’t be JUST a real world animal. For example, Tauros is really close to a real bull, but besides Pokemon stylings, like a mane and the head dots, Tauros has the tail whips, so he can whip himself to go faster and be more aggressive.
What’s different between your mon and a real cockatiel? Is it big? Pokemon need a theme that separates them from reality to some degree, and the theme is actually more important than the evolutionary line, as in Remoraid and Octillery.

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:26:23 No.40935251 Report

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>>40935093
Any other recommendations for changes?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:28:14 No.40935289 Report

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>>40934990
Correction.
Most evolutions get bigger(size increase), but not LITERALLY.
Pangoro is larger than Pancham, but is designed as a "grown up" version of it instead of a Pancham with a few tweaks.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:32:46 No.40935404 Report

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>>40933724

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:34:00 No.40935418 Report

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>>40933724
Mega Poliwrath (rip)

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:35:14 No.40935437 Report

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>>40935251
now it suffers still from "just gets bigger" as the evolution, and the final still looks a little too real-bird and not pokemon enough. this is my concept for making it more pokemon-like and distinguishing the evolutions from each other more.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:36:24 No.40935457 Report

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>>40933724
A little bit my moms cockatiel but I stilk like it a lot

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:37:58 No.40935491 Report

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>>40935251
you’re a good sport for taking the constructive crit well, it really is a cute concept and I think you took the advice well. The only thing I can think of is that a lightning bolt theme would match well maybe in its head feathers but this is fine and uncrowded, so it has its own appeal

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:41:15 No.40935558 Report

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>>40933724
I like it. Names could be Surgikeet and Shockatiel.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:41:57 No.40935571 Report

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>>40935437
>>40934569
OP should really go with these
The final form feels like an evolution and not just an enlarged first form

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:43:02 No.40935593 Report

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>>40935437
I really love the lightning pattern in its neck feathers, I’ll change it’s design to that and see if I can make a few more tweaks to make them look more Pokémon-y

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:53:25 No.40935785 Report

Quoted By: >>40936066 >>40936218

Here is revised cockatiels what do you guys think?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 16:58:07 No.40935905 Report

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Unrelated to my birbs, here’s a Rowlet I drew :>

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:04:53 No.40936066 Report

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>>40935785
Give the first form a black hair tuft and it's perfect

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:06:43 No.40936116 Report

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Here's my regional birb, normal/flying, evolves into fairy/flying.
It's based on a sparrow and a red cardinal, with themes from romantic theatre

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:08:29 No.40936160 Report

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>>40936116
Evolution in based on a peacock and retains the same themes as the prevo, but gets a ball mask as a beak

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:09:03 No.40936172 Report

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Bug type Eevee

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:09:04 No.40936174 Report

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>>40936066
Like this?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:10:37 No.40936218 Report

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>>40935785
I know this sounds strange, but why not give it’s wings a very dark navy blue shade to them rather an black? It’d stand out a small bit more and blue is also commonly related to electricity

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:15:51 No.40936356 Report

Quoted By: >>40937011

Alright I think I’m done, I like the way they look now. Thanks to everyone for the criticism ^^

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:17:03 No.40936391 Report

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Sporkeon

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:18:03 No.40936416 Report

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>>40933724
This is LITERALLY a cockatiel.

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:18:54 No.40936442 Report

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:19:31 No.40936455 Report

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>>40935404

Added a shiny.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:19:41 No.40936461 Report

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>>40936416
If you scroll up 2 posts you’ll see the revised final cockatiel Pokémon.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:20:47 No.40936485 Report

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:22:25 No.40936524 Report

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Applemon.

He looks like an apple but isn't.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:25:17 No.40936590 Report

Quoted By: >>40936644

>>40936455
You gave me an idea and I also made some shiny forms uwu

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:27:21 No.40936644 Report

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>>40936590
Think having the cere on there is one of those details that would usually get omitted for a mon design

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:44:12 No.40937011 Report

Quoted By: >>40938080 >>40940503 >>40941293

Here's a gen 1 fossil I designed on a whim a few months ago.
>>40936160
I love this, but I think the scarf is out of place. Could you perhaps replace it with a nod to the prevo's facial markings but moved to the chest?
>>40936442
I love this round, chubby robo-Eeveelution, is it steel type?
>>40936356
I really like the changes you've made, and I was wondering how you envisioned its electric attacks. Do they come from the wings, the talons, the cheek markings?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 17:53:44 No.40937253 Report

Quoted By: >>40937557

Smolfin, Squalfin, Walestrom

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 18:06:07 No.40937557 Report

Quoted By: >>40937607

>>40937253
Redraw of Walestrom to be based on a basilosaurus. Water/dragon pseudo of the Layaska region

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 18:08:08 No.40937607 Report

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>>40937557
Ciclaw and Shivern, ice->ice/dragon

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 18:11:36 No.40937694 Report

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>>40937607
One of the two main legends of the Layaska region, Skywaruga. It’s counterpart is Auryugon, a lung dragon based on the northern lights. They represent the night sky, and appear only when Layaska is in balance. The third member of the trio is a peacock based on light pollution, which has been drawn to the region by the spread of industrialization in the region. Skywaruga and Auryugon only appear after it has been captured or defeated. The theme of the region is conservation. More mons later

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 18:13:02 No.40937736 Report

Quoted By: >>40937832 >>40938130

Ice/Fire walrus
its blubber/fur keeps its fire burning even in the harshest cold

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 18:16:29 No.40937832 Report

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>>40937736
Make it a single stage
The final evo doesn’t change much from the pre evo

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 18:26:11 No.40938080 Report

Quoted By: >>40943214

>>40937011
seeing a furry mon in the gen 1 style is weird

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 18:27:52 No.40938130 Report

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>>40937736
i absolutely love it

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 19:00:45 No.40938922 Report

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>>40933724
I'm not like good at art but I did draw a take on a grass starter once. Its name is cabbcub.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 19:01:40 No.40938949 Report

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>>40933767
JUST

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 19:11:48 No.40939219 Report

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>>40933724

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 19:45:43 No.40940239 Report

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 19:53:08 No.40940503 Report

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>>40937011
I think the tail ice is unnecessary. I would exaggerate the arm and tooth ice

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 20:09:35 No.40941000 Report

Quoted By: >>40945018

>>40936160
Why not just make this a proper Aromatisse evolution? The pre evo seems almost redundant. I think it has potential but CardinalxFlamingoxPhoenix is a bit much. Most would agree that fire fits all three of those birds in concept but your design looks more cloud like. It’s sorta hard to understand it conceptually

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 20:19:40 No.40941293 Report

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>>40937011
It just looks like a furry who stuck his hands
In dry ice

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 20:23:04 No.40941399 Report

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>>40939219
He cute

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 20:25:49 No.40941477 Report

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>>40933724
it's a cute drawing anon but it just looks like a cockatiel. I still like it though!

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 20:32:09 No.40941668 Report

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>>40933724
>Phonelemur, the Cellular Pokemon
>Steel/Psychic

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 21:20:41 No.40943214 Report

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>>40938080
>>40941293
I completely see the issue here, so thank you for the honest criticism. I was trying to make it one of those "ambiguous monsters" and decided on a kangaroo-like lower half, hence the bipedal stance and tail. I assume it would be better as a quadruped, so I'll make that change.
>>40940503
I appreciate these suggestions too, thank you anon. I think I'll make the front legs encased in ice bulkier to be smilodon-like.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 21:36:23 No.40943787 Report

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>>40933724
I can't drawn but i once imagined a concept of a two stager.

A Steel Pokémon based on a Roman Legionaire (Nidici) that has a Dark-Steel Trade Evo (Etutos) that evolves due resentment of being traded away and has signature move that works like Frustration and ability that makes it not obey its OT.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 22:14:02 No.40945018 Report

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>>40941000
it's a venetian carneval peacock with cloudy feathers, it's not that fancy of a concept, what's there not to understand?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 08 Nov 2019 22:41:39 No.40945861 Report

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Layaska is a polar region loosely based on the Himalayas, the Arctic, and the Antarctic. This is meounce, an ice/flying type that is both based on snow leopards and a visual pun based on clouded leopards. Local lore describes them as “so innocent they never touch the ground.” Unable to hunt for themselves, Meounce spend most of the day sleeping atop snow clouds high in the mountains, awaiting their mother’s return. Evolves once.

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