>>45488231Middle evo is pretty cute. Don't know if I'd choose to have it over the one we have now but I also wouldn't be upset over it, they're approximately equal.
Final evo I'm not too fond of. Is there a reasoning behind the giant tail? Smoke? Dust Bunny? Either way, it fucks up the silhouette, it just WAY too big. You might be able to keep it if you scalle it down to no bigger than 2/3rds it's current size.
I also feel like it has too much going on with it's head in such a small space. Either make it the head bigger but keep the details around the same size they are now, or remove some of them.
While I do think I overall prefer the small nub feet instead of the long feet, it's odd to use them when Scorbunny and the fake form use different ones. Though maybe I'm dumb and these are actually 2 separate designs put together for this pic.
Also I do like the small bits of personality you can see from her in her ref sheet.
Definitely wouldn't replace Cinderace with her though.
>>45488575Cute design, but doesn't feel like a starter. I think the biggest issue I can think of is the colors. Every other starter has their element's color at least somewhat prominent. It's fixed by the fire, but the design sheet suggests it isn't nearly always on, unlike Typhlosion who is otherwise in a similar situation.
Would take as a non-starter.
