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>>48804188
If you’re writing smut, then writing about entering a den seems like a bit of a waste of time? Perhaps I just prefer my written porn to be more direct, but it feels like something you can glance over or skip through.

Like, in a movie, you don’t need to show a character going from point A to point B with a long section about the car ride unless you’re purposefully doing something there. You can just cut to the new scene and the audience will understand there’s some travel in between. Unless you specifically want some sort of flirting or something to rile a character up, I might just skip from point A to point B.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 11:29:50 No.48804601 Report

Quoted By: >>48804657

>>48804586
I'll make the entering scene short and sweet but I still want to explain that they entered the den instead of just "They started at point A then went to point E" while skipping a lot of details.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 11:31:35 No.48804609 Report

Quoted By: >>48804620

>>48804188
>Move the rocks around the hole to make space
>Throw in rope and climb down
You better link the thing when you're done with it

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 11:33:43 No.48804620 Report

Quoted By: >>48804631

>>48804609
The thread will probably die before I'm finished.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 11:36:46 No.48804631 Report

Quoted By: >>48804647

>>48804620
Can you link blog/DA/whatever?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 11:40:04 No.48804647 Report

Quoted By: >>48804704 >>48807300 >>48810022

>>48804631
Apart of me really wants to link you to my AO3 account but I'm too paranoid the story will end up being shit and you'll get disappointed.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 11:42:21 No.48804652 Report

Quoted By: >>48804657

>>48804586
just write
after climbing/clambering through the den, leaves it vague enough you dont have to explain shit
and then dont forget to add similies like peony's shitbox was dark as a max raid then as chairman rose plunged his big diglett dick inside

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 11:43:24 No.48804657 Report

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>>48804652
den* also meant for >>48804601 obviously

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 11:52:36 No.48804704 Report

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>>48804647
Have faith in your writing anon, i'm sure it'll turn out fine, don't overthink it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 11:57:43 No.48804720 Report

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>>48804236
>Would they fit in?
If they aren't too fat yea. Just look at it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 12:08:50 No.48804764 Report

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>>48804188
magic teleport
team rocket and abra have teleport(ers), so why can't dynamax power?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 14:53:51 No.48805648 Report

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bump

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 14:56:02 No.48805660 Report

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>>48804188
They literally just hop in. Do you notice at the beginning of every Raid their animation is lifting themselves up?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 17:30:58 No.48806983 Report

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Enter the PokeDen like a wet pussy. Then enter the giant wet pussy of the Pokemon inside it.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 18:02:33 No.48807300 Report

Quoted By: >>48809241

>>48804647
Expected wordcount dear WriteAnon?
I'm still hesitant to actually go along with my stupid idea for a greentext hornypost story I once asked for advice with planning out...
>Me on the right, ponderin' Y de strange talkin' Eevee I founded lately refuse to lay any eggs after lotsa breedin' with all of our ~Eon boys for da hole week strait...

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 19:45:53 No.48808262 Report

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Bum

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 20:05:10 No.48808436 Report

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>>48804188
You step into the light and are transported to a realm where physics are warped.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 21:28:03 No.48809241 Report

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>>48807300
I've wrote 1500~ so far, I expect it to be maybe 2500-4000.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 21:38:19 No.48809341 Report

Quoted By: >>48809538

>>48804188
But what's the smut about?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 21:58:00 No.48809538 Report

Quoted By: >>48809574 >>48809989

>>48809341
Poképhilia

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 22:02:48 No.48809574 Report

Quoted By: >>48809961

>>48809538
>pokephilia
>dynamax
Anon if you don't share this kino i WILL come to your house and i WILL piss on your face

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 22:39:04 No.48809961 Report

Quoted By: >>48810085 >>48810133

>>48809574
The dynamaxed Pokémon is mainly just a distraction, when a character's Pokémon faints a wild Pokémon comes out of the mist to rape them.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 22:40:24 No.48809989 Report

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>>48809538
Which one tho?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 22:42:44 No.48810022 Report

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>>48804647
>OH BOY TWO CAKES

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 22:47:09 No.48810085 Report

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>>48809961
Ah dang, I'm not into it personally but dynamax for the purposes of gigantism fetish seems super underutilized for being so obvious.

Mind you I've never gone specifically looking for it, maybe it's popular and just not anywhere I frequent.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 22:51:22 No.48810133 Report

Quoted By: >>48810149

>>48809961
>when a character's Pokémon faints a wild Pokémon comes out of the mist to rape them.
Rape the character, their Pokemon or both?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Nov 2021 22:52:26 No.48810149 Report

Quoted By: >>48811403

>>48810133
The character

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Nov 2021 00:29:58 No.48811204 Report

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>>48804188
Right underground there is a walkable passageway, but the entry hole we see in the games is actually that tight of a fit and hard to squeeze into. Hilda hates doing Max Raids when visiting Galar because although you just walk into the open den by using the passageway her fat ass always gets stuck upside down first when entering and someone has to press on her fat ass with both hands to get her through.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Nov 2021 00:50:05 No.48811403 Report

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>>48810149
Why stop there? 3;D

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Nov 2021 00:59:19 No.48811502 Report

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>>48804188
>How do people enter Pokémon Dens?
Like Santa down a chimney.
>I'm writing smut
Dick first then. And sometimes a guy goes down one and before they can pick themselves up off the ground at the bottom, a girl may fall right on his dick.

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