>>48993081I finished reading it. It's a 5k word sex scene and it's exhausting to get through. The language is repetitive and a single position lasts multiple paragraphs. They have entire conversations while they're fucking leading to such great quotes as
>"I'd tell all of Sinnoh to get blacked!"The work is tagged "porn without a plot" but the plot is that Shirona only uses her status to fulfill her sexual desires and wants everyone to act as hedonistic as her, we'll see how that develops in the second chapter. I'd say a better tag would be "porn where nothing happens" because it's just things happening to her that she never objects to or wants to change, and the only thing that happens is they have sex. We don't know enough about the Elite Four or Sinnoh culture that would make us think her fetish getting out would be a career ender for her, and that's not even necessarily a bad thing since training Pokémon seems to be more of a distraction than anything since it takes her away from being with black men. Overall, there's a story to be told here, but he seemed more interested in appeasing the commissioner's fetish than making anything worth reading.
>tl;dr D-, apply yourself 
