>>51697973I feel like the design is a little busy. I like the idea you went for with it resembling a Samurai.
I'm unsure if it should look this monstrous though. Bisharp was a more humanoid mon and the design was mostly knightly. There were some loose chess elements to it but I'm not sure if they were exclusive to localisation.
Also as
>>51698035 points out, Kleavor just did the whole axe for arms thing which is why the same gimmick here falls a little flat.
I have ripped this design to shreds but I actually think the art is really cool, and in a vacuum I really like how it looks, it just doesn't really fit where you want it to fit. Don't be discouraged OP! 
