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Here's how my English teacher would grade this paragraph, if I presented it to her:
>red line under 'we've': Why did you contract this but not the 'It has' at the start of the sentence?
>underline over 'Tera Raid Battle events' and 'dozens of events' because of repetition
> a comma after Tera Raid Battle events because the list had less than 3 items in it
>'more?' in red ink after the 'so much', being confused why the phrase was unfinished
>'region of Paldea' crossed out and 'Paldea region' written overhead
>Full stop added after Paldea, 'and' crossed out because it's a run-on sentence.
>'and,' underlined, with 'comma ALWAYS goes before the and!!' written besides it
>another question mark over 'we're', referencing back to the first point
>' "The Hidden Treasure of Area Zero" has a note next to it asking why direct quotations were only used there and nowhere else/
I'd probably get a D, but she'd give me a dismissive glance while giving me back the paper. I don't think Joe'd survive in her class.
