Hello

I'd like to have your feedback on the first part of my first chapter.
If you like, I can post the rest of the work.

I post out of the tread fanfics because I'm drowning in the Mass, I go unnoticed
I hope to get a little more noticed here.


1/?

Title: The Relationship

Chapter 1
The rare pearl

There are as many people as there are grains of sand on your favorite beach, some friendly, others disreputable.
Unable to choose my original world, I find myself here, in front of the altar of space, pursued by the Galaxie team, (an organization which aims to be friendly, advocating living together, working in renewable energy, at low prices, for all) most of the members lying at my feet.
The poor people experienced for the first time, a fight where the “trainer” actively participates, a rare fight where pokemon, trainer, are fused, a rare fight where I, Arimma Ko, bonded with a pokemon, allowing me to share our abilities, in part.
This is how my story begins, Hélio facing me, separating me from my goal, my aura crackling with magical energy, reverberating through this place of ancient worship.


Hélio, leader of the galaxy team, faces me, in the middle of the steps leading to an altar, dedicated to the god of space, Palkia.
Hélio displays the official logo of his “organization”, a diagonal blue G, around which a miniature planet orbits, all on a white background.
Hélio, seems to become aware of my presence, gently shakes his head from left to right, blinking, he comes out of his reverie.
Helio
Arimma Ko…
I heard about your project, you see, I share the same dream.
I dream of a world where Humans and Pokémon live in harmony!
A world where war is unnecessary!
A world where the weak have the right to live!
A world where everyone has their place!
A world where energy and resources would no longer be wasted, would be limitless, clean, free!

Be continued...