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"Alright Golurk, here is fine. I'll walk the rest of the way." Orden said to his flying automation as he touched down on the outside of Kiloude City. "Thank you buddy, I know you're not tired from all that flying due to your energy core. But I would still be a horrible trainer if I treated you like a weapon."
>Break right here because dialogue should be separate from action.You put your hand on Golurk's shoulder as he nods in understanding. You then dropped to the ground and returned him to his poke ball.
>Break right here for pacing since there is time passing between this and the following action.And so you walk to Kiloude City, a place popular with trainers for one reason and one reason only, the Battle Maison. You don't know much about the Battle Maison, you don't know much about Kalos in general. You've never been here before, and since it's night time you don't think it's wise to bother the locals either. So you just trudge along, hoping to find a Pokémon center. They're usually easy to spot.
And unless your eyes deceive you, you think that building in front of that fancy Mansion could be it. So Orden walks in and heads towards the PokeMart section.
"What will it be?" The cashier said with enough "enthusiasm" to get a Slaking dancing.
>Breaks here for clarity. The reader should know when each person begins to speak.Orden, not wanting to take up to much of this gentlemen's time quickly gave his order. "Ten potions, ten repels."
"Ten repels? You planning on sleeping outside?" Asked the cashier.
"My money goes towards what I need, my Pokémon, then me. Checking in to a place costs money, and is also unnecessary when I can camp outside the city. So yes, I am planning on sleeping outside." Orden stated.
"Alright, here you go." The cashier handed you the items and you give him the amount needed to pay for it.
