In this document, I have typed up my analysis of Pokemon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire after replaying them 11 years after the original release. Please give me feedback on the review before I publish it to a game article site. For instance do I need any revising and editing?

https://limewire.com/d/UsIfO#PB5ZKREAni

Had to share it with limewire because this site does not allow me to upload ODT docs. I use Linux and do not pay for Microsoft Word.