>>2781609Took a quick look at three of your streams, here's some feedback
>Voice is pretty goodMost loli/chibi voices come off as quite grating but you pull it off well
>Not a lot going onThere seems to be a lot of dead air when it comes to your streams. You give off the impression that you don't really have anything to talk about or that you are too nervous. You should look into learning how to talk about random stuff just to fill dead air.
>Reliance on your viewersBoth good and bad. The times you seem to become active and interesting are when you have somebody to bounce off of in the chat or in a collab, but this is also a negative, as when you have nobody to bounce off of you start to clam up and that dead air crops up. Viewer interaction is good but they shouldn't be running the show. Your friends also dominate the stream a bit too much when you collab with them, at least when their crappy microphones aren't scuffing everything up.
>Designs and themingYour avatar is cute enough, I probably wouldn't remember it after a year or so but it isn't an eyesore. Your magical girl theming, layouts and music leave more of an impression desu, which is good. Very well done. Work on getting some of the scuff fixed though, like the audio glitches and loading screen freezes.
Overall you are doing better than most. 4.5K subscribers is nothing to scoff at. In comparision, Koopa has 3K, and everyone only seems to have good things to say about her, so obviously you're doing good enough right now. Work on your confidence, fix the scuff, and do some touch ups on your model, and you could go places.
