>>47105934Not entirely unrelated but I went to AO3 for reference on something I'm writing and it's crazy how good some people are at writing smut, or just in general. I don't particularly doubt my skills, but I do know that when compared to some of them, there is still MUCH room for improvement. I really need to focus on diversifying actions in-between long dialogue scenes, and also to write out more paragraphs that don't reference any of the characters directly, just describe the scene and the feelings of the moment without any "you" or "she".
