>>67904582>>67908086Thank you! I'm glad you guys enjoy it so much!
>>67908671Cutting that scene was the last thing I did to edit it and I did go back and forth on the idea, and ultimately I felt like it'll be better for the story going forward if I keep the perspectives down to just Anon and Polka for the most part. I'll be sure to keep references to (You) in the third person during them too. I can never make up my mind on that, cause as writing of course it makes sense to me who they're talking about, but obviously it's not so clear-cut to a reader.
>spoilerThe original idea was gonna leave it much more ambiguous, but I want to avoid the more obvious arguments inherent to the idea of bringing someone back and give Polka more of a basis to stand on rather than just being grief-stricken enough to go along with it. It's gonna be touched on before he finds out, but Anon has certain feelings towards necromancy that I think become much more interesting when he's confronted with it already having happened. 