>>37449403I sat down and hammered it out all in one sitting because the first chapter set a hook in my mouth and dragged me from the shallows to the surface. And boy fucking howdy am I glad that I chose to do so, what a fucking ride.
While I initially shared the resentment of Ayame, I somehow found myself connecting to her in an incredibly strange way with regards to the sex shit. It was a little emotionally jarring. I think that maybe she and Anon had a bit of a quick turn around time in the span of a few days, but ultimately, seeing them happy together made *me* happy, though I also was screaming internally over Aqua getting cucked. Words fail to describe the relief in my chest when it was revealed to be fine between the two of them. The actual date filled me with a disgusting sort of saccharine sweetness that resonated throughout the hallows of my heart and left me feeling at peace with this fucking whore. I only wished I shared Anon's ability to press on past anxieties and worries. Having them *actually* fuck was...really, really satisfying in some way. Like, I wanted it at the end, a complete and total turnaround from the beginning where I was mentally chanting 'Headbutt.' as she approached. Your smut, by the by, is fucking mint. The foreplay and build up is is fucking awesome, and is definitely something to learn from! By the time they actually got to bumping uglies, I was fucking sinking my nails into my thighs. The callbacks to the earlier dialogue sprinkled in was an amazing touch. I cannot stress enough that that - and this is as a whole- was some great shit.
You better make a fucking sequel, you slimy cunt. You can't leave that epilogue there. I'll kill you. I'll rip you in fucking half. Genuinely astounded that you managed to make Rrat!Ayame appealing to me in such a way, but here we are. Maybe it's all the kissing, since that's totally my biggest weakness... I can genuinely say this is an easy recommendation to almost anyone remotely interested in a nice fluffy series with a healthy nugget of drama within it. You've outdone yourself, and all that extra time and effort has paid off to make a wonderful story. The length to which it was stretched has given it a great chance to let all the punches land - it wouldn't have been nearly as good if it was a mere 30k words. So, rest easy, the wait was worth it. You're a champion.
Mark is the single greatest UK hero left alive and I would do anything to protect his smile for his efforts in forging Anon's. A fucking bro. The king of kings. 