>>15009658I love these subtle impactful details that makes your stomach feel weird when you read it and it makes you stop and think for a second about the deeper implications. There's a moment in this visual novel called Kill or Love (free on steam btw) in which
your girlfriend who you've been separated by due to a yandere is said to be sucking an old man's cock to be able to live in his apartment rent free because she didn't manage to find a job while trying to save you as well. It was just one or two lines, but it's what cemented the visual novel into my mind as special, though the rest of the game wasn't anything amazing. In some of my fics, I tried doing something akin to that but I probably failed, or perhaps readers don't care, or maybe they never even read it. Either way I'm still very in love with the concept, even if it's some sort of cheap shock value.
