>>23800831VERY good shit my dude, loved the gradual corruption and little character arcs Subaru and Haruko went through. In particular that final stretch from her last dance lesson to the end was extremely effective, really liked the train of short-ish scenes showing time blurring together for her.
Somehow still felt it built tension properly all the way through as well: a common problem with fapfics of this length is blowing their load too early and putting the reader in a mindset where future erotic scenes have their impact weakened, but this was captivating from beginning to end, truly. I'll really remember this one
