>>57444759>>57443032>The Tower of Tattle Part III I looked at your original posts for this and I can really see where the 'you wanted to make this a VN' aspect came in with the route splitting puzzle for this. I like it even if it does kind of feel nonessential/adjacent to the 'real story' despite the foreshadowing.
>Part IVI like the prose here, though I can't really say much since this is pretty much an in-between chapter for both events and character relationship.
>Part V>sussuri>Sussurokawa Again, this feels like another in-between chapter. Though I did like the reveal about who the protagonist is. Actually ties in part 3 to everything else, and makes it seem less like it was just a fun aside. Hope the big ending for this ends up great. 