>>6844502picrel
In all seriousness, why do you think it can be improved? All Watamelons are welcome here, and it's a great first edit
and honestly a great fucking edit in general, you even gave the watamelon the same kind of shading/dithering effect as the rest of the art now that I look at it 1:1 and the edit around her hands is clean AF. exquisite, really, I can taste the salty ocean watamelon from here.