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Go to the archive and read some fics. Doesn't have to be random this time, just pick a fic and share your thoughts.
>Memoirs of Bunny Cunny
Heh.
If we ever do another contest we really need a category for short fics (or poems) like these. I think it would be fun to have a constrained category for stuff like greentext or poems.
>Towa!
Hot.
It's literally the plot of a moral degeneration doujin in greentext form, and I'm reasonably certain it's only as hot as it is for me because of I've read stuff like that before so the mind fills in what the text doesn't say.
I think a moral degeneration/corruption fic would be hot. It would be trashy as hell but hot.
>Tsuya
This fic has some weird present tense for the narration it uses. Like I get where the idea of using it is coming from, Suisei is facing the tragedy of her Sister's death at the wake and is still trying to process it, so naturally the present tense makes sense conceptually. Unfortunately execution-wise it just causes more flow breaking prose than it adds in impact. I remember the ending hitting real hard when I first read this a year or so ago, maybe it was because I wasn't reading into it that much back then.
