>>16989989Yo remember that time I told you guys that chapter 4 was 80% done at around 18k words? Yeah that was a fucking lie so here's chapter 4 with around 26k words.
First Summer Memories Ch. 4 - Day worth remembering
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSf3xc1oNFuud83XPPOX8cwU2PltWvDSyWgVz8_1nJ-WWic3JbE7JTFIwnCT-ap4ctAui_-nWRL5kCG/pubTags: Flare, SFW, Fluff, Romance
As always I would appreciate any criticism you may have as I am currently dead tired and I would like it if you guys tell me of anything dialogue or sentences that feel off or just plain wrong altogether and I hope that the people looking forward to this are happy with this chapter cause it took so long to finally publish. This mostly focuses on the relationship aspect and not much else in the memory ones but I hope people still enjoy it regardless
Also I finally got the chance to finally read through the entirety of HF minus chapter 6 and and holy shit is it good. Like damn, I feel a little intimidated by AA in a good way cause fuck was it fantastic.
Did the romance feel nice or is it off in a few areas? CH Anon was right and that romance is fucking difficult to write so I hope I did whoever was looking forward to this a service.
Also, if the final two parts feel a little rushed or are weird in a few areas please let me know so I could change it. Those are the parts I feel most troubled by and if you guys find anything do let me know. 