>>33513248Noted.
I liked the mixed perspective myself.
I wanted Anon's therapy and first reminiscence bit to be personal, and thus it's spoken in first person. As the story centers itself around Fubuki, you're refers to (you) as you I do understand however, it came out weird. I'll change it later
>by the tags and tone it's probably not going to end up like that Matsuri grooming outline.I'm afraid I don't know which one you're talking about, care to enlighten me?
>>33515560Yes, and thanks. Although I suppose I'll change some details later.
