This is general advice. If you're going to post smut here for people to read, please for the love of god read it yourself first. Make sure it flows, and PLEASE don't write shit that repeats the same words in quick sucsession. I get it, there are only so many ways to describe sex, but when I'm reading part of a script related to object/physical mechanics, as in say where a coffee mug is being placed, or how a strand of saliva has snapped from the base of a popsicle, PLEASE don't immediately follow that up with "And then I snapped back into reality."
If you wanted to reference Eminem so damn bad, change the first instance of the word.
>>76997553https://vocaroo.com/118zyfN55hXFCompared to my clip yesterday, I think the biggest contributing factor I have to that is how I elongate the "GOOD" GIRL" as if they were two separate words, but most of my speech is overly enunciated from a lifetime spent trying to sound like the talking heads on TV.
>>76998293It never hurts to lurk more, but if you want better or more direct advice without getting vague posted on by people in the thread, you should kill two birds with one stone by networking on Discord to ask the other aspies directly via DM or the shared networking servers.
You will get faster responses and better advice.
