>>1989439I dunno about the clip selections or potential yabs since I'm only partway through the video (doubt it'll be much of an issue though) but you gotta replace the transitions with something a little less windows movie maker-ish
a suggestion is taking pic related as a background, putting the text in the grey part, and using a font that actually catches the eye and not something designed to blend in like arial
and also some BGM would go a long way
