>>70027988>QuickshotYeah, that's the plan really, she was desperate and wanted to get a quicky in, although that would probably come at the end of the fic. The other point is really good, gonna make use of that.
>>70029391You have a good point there that I didn't think about, Let Suisei indulge in her fetish, taking in in nice and easy. As for the goofy thing, I just wanted to portray that they had a relationship where they both felt comfortable with each other.
>>70032004Yeah essentially letting them get lost in the sauce and going wild with a bunch of pent up feelings and desires. Sounds good to me.
>>70039264Oh yeah grammar and punctuation are usually the last things I work on but thank you for the reminder
Thank you for all the advice and feedback
