>>67831795I really liked the story you put together. The grammar is a little rough at times, but that can be expected from a direct translation. The sex was a little awkward to follow though, mostly in that Suisei was at first demanding and clearly ovulating so she is ready to go, and the next she claims she's not ready to take all of Anon in. It also plays out like normal sex instead of anon giving the mouthy maid her "punishment". All in all, I really enjoyed the interactions and the fluff of a Suisei housewife who gets what she wants from her man. Thanks for the read bro.
>>67817979This could use some formatting touch-ups. Spacing and proper paragraphs will go a long way. The content itself has the meat to lead to something more interesting, but it just leaves me wanting more context. Something like a prior scene where Mel had just realized what she done, or when she was in her blood haze in the act. There's a lot more this story wants to tell me, but just hasn't yet. I hope you expand on the concept, it's pretty neat.