>>11568842Thanks. I'm probably going to just change some of the incorrectly capitalized words and add in some of the desperately missing punctuation.
Admittedly the only reason I'm really triggered about it is because they're singable and as such are going to be sung by English speakers who are more likely to notice the errors if they sing it.
That and they'll either they correct it subconsciously or sing it as it is written. Only thing I can't easily correct in the soft subs is the "Be honest with yourself for all" because I think that line needs to be rewritten in a way that matches the original rhythm, and then timing the edited line, and then editing it into the four or so blocks it corresponds to.
The original line it corresponds to was
"Why are you lying? [Just tell me the truth.]" which is honestly pretty difficult to translate without expanding onto it further.
