>>65256198Thanks!
>>65259265Gracias for the read. I really am kicking myself for not having started writing earlier and being so wishy-washy about what to write my story about, because that would have given me time to put a lot more flowering, as you said, to my story. I'm glad you enjoyed it all the same, Iroha love!
>>65271427Thank you for pointing out the intimate scenes, that's what I was going for. As I mentioned previously it would have been ideal for me to spend more time refining this, but I guess I've missed that chance. As for the Kuro fic, I just couldn't figure out where to take it honestly. To make the text messages all I did was search "fake text mesage creator" (typo and all) and click the first one that came up. There's plenty online you can pick from.
>>65285045>I'm honored that you consider it one of your favoritesTsk tsk. Not ONE of my favourites, THE favourite. Seriously though, great job on this. As you guessed I am the author of Deal with the Devil and it brings shame to me as a Kenzoku that my characterization of Towa has fallen short. I do plan on developing her character as the series continues which, based on my diminishing writing speed, is a long while away. I think that might be part of why I took so long to start writing her, because I was overthinking things and scared of not getting it right.
