>>33568882I can't really give any feedback in terms of writing, other than to say that you accidentally wrote "shit" instead of "shirt" when talking about Roboco at one point.
I enjoyed the chapter. Despite the fact that I can't wait to see how the story resolves the current arc, I like how it's paced.
Interesting choice of beliefs for Fauna. It'd be amusing if you could expand on that a little later on, but don't force it if it won't fit.Also, please throw Roboco off the roof. Thanks.
