>>7013060Minute 47 to 60
>Good thingYou did well dealing with a (largely) dead chat. Playing around a bit and experimenting ingame is a good thing (like you did getting the Ball Power). Your experience with the game helped a lot. Hunting secrets is content. The weirdness about the red dot in the air is fun. Going off stuff like that is entertaining.
>Bad thingA bit more color in your voice would be good. A bit more tension, excitement, intonation. It'll come naturally.
When you talk about the "someone says no spoilers" you have a good energy in your vocals that is missing a bit in the rest of what I've seen.
You mentioned filtering yourself in parts. Feel free to set that filter looser and talk about your interests. Careful not to slip into menhera tho.
You need to network. Your stream is good to look at, you can show yourself infront of other people.
