>>15999169Not my thing personally since I like Kronii as a dom, but I suggest you forward this to /∞/ - fanfics are always welcome there, especially Kronii ones.
>Rick and Morty referenceredditchama…
In all honesty it’s pretty good especially for a first smut fic (I still cringe at my early ones) but I can’t give much useful feedback due to my tastes being weird. I do like the way Kronii is written as haughty and arrogant since it makes the whole dom loss thing worthwhile and gives it buildup. You could definitely also write dom Kronii if you chose, at least in my opinion. Also nice to see actual time travel, I myself have seen little of that in the /∞/ fics, admittedly only having written one time travel one and sticking otherwise entirely with futa smut. Remarkably few people use her time powers for smut, most seem to use them in chuuni fics and leave it at that, so it’s good to see them used differently.
7/10 not my kinks like I said but I can respect the grind and encourage a sequel if you feel up to it
T.
Sekkusu of /∞/ 