>>62045598This was a cute little read. I'll say you got Botan's playful and goading nature when it comes to sex pretty down. The gradual progression of the attempts and the responses to them was pretty well done. It was ultimately a sweet little piece that showcases how a positive partner can be the light someone needs the most when it comes to tragedy outside their control. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, so maybe another pass at proofreading and edits is needed. For instance I think you meant to say "sweet" during one of the sex scenes instead of "sweat". I don't think it was your intent for anyone to fap to those scenes, but if it was, you'd want them to be longer. Overall, I liked it, and it was cute. Nice work bro. You're also inspiring me to soldier on in my own story to reach eventual lioness breeding.
