>>81307206>second line is cringeIt's a poem about a collection of pixels on the internet. Don't take it so seriously, anon. Doves are birds frequently associated with love (which this poem is about) via the connection to marriage significance, so usage of "dove" is fine.
>third line is stupidVery useful feedback here anon, I'm getting a lot of info from you here
:^). "Though" is needed to keep meter as a 1-syllable word, but doesn't serve purpose in the sentence grammatically so it should get rewritten as a whole, like I said to begin with. It achieves its goal as-is, but that goal is lacking and wouldn't hurt getting replaced, like I said in the above post.