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Thanks to everyone who took the time to read the HOLOCORP dossier. Ive given it a second pass (not that in depth because im busy) and reworded some stuff. If more mistakes arise, i will try to get them pronto
Here's some changes and general trivia
>Added HOLOX.
The great king of terror descended in 1999, and thanks to Nostradamus, humanity was prepared. The "Curved saber of the South Liberator" is just the saber that the south american revolutionaries used. When i was researching south america for a weapon idea, i found that there were 2 movements, one that came from the north (venezuela) and one that came from the south (Argentina). That's cool because both met in the middle and that liberated South America.
>Reworked Anya
Abiogenesis creating miss one million is a cool idea and maybe the step that Dr mayodog is looking for. A puppet with free will, created out of death matter. I like that kind of ideas
>Rewrote Kobo
Thanks to that Anon, i touched up a bit some other paragraphs.
>Reworked Marine
Her initial idea was lame. I wanted to imply she was, originally, THE ponce de leon. That was left behind because i like the idea of Marine just getting there before him. Maybe she was blackbeard, maybe she wasnt who knows. pirates should be free.
