>>7288203>>7283084I realized I didn't say enough to show how much I liked this because I was rushing and
had to do another presentation. The way you characterized both characters and their interactions melts my heart?????? It's so cute Dusty really cares about anonny and the picnic so much. I really like how the two banter; it just feels so natural and sweet. Anon is also painted as someone who loves dusty very much and I. Can't. Take. It!!!!??!!! The little details they notice about each other is diabetes inducing. The imagery of the rain and the sun peeking through is too beautiful. The way anon sneezes and smiles... The gaudy pillow.... >>7289348I don't think those parts were bad writing. I just naturally trip up on reading everything...
>>7288277I have no idea how that happened when I haven't even posted my first video yet. I've only been doodleposting... Anons are just too sweet.
