>>20964235Hey, thanks, I appreciate the compliments. I also agree that it was rushed, absolutely. Iirc I wrote the whole thing in like two days or something to get it done before Christmas.
>do the depressing lyrics of 'Snowflakes' mean anything to the story or is the music just there to set the mood?To set the mood sure, but also
foreshadowing.>>20963669I swear to god I am going to incinerate that fat fuck.
>>20965868Hot damn, I'm envious of how fast you write. I don't think the ending was too abrupt, it wrapped everything up pretty nicely. This whole thing was great at conveying darker, more realistic themes and I'm all for it. Nice job.
