>>36930385Thank you! The combat took me a minute to figure out again because I got back into pro wrestling and had to suppress the urge to make things overly flashy, so I'm glad I was able to get back on track with that.
>>36935859Wow, that's some high praise! I'll be sure to go over and look for typos when I've got the time, Google Docs started getting weird and stopped being as helpful with that. Dunno what happened
I'm glad you like all that. My biggest worry was that the scope was a little much and that this chapter covered too much ground in terms of establishment, but at the same time I felt that moving a lot of that to later would mean that it comes off as...cheap and kinda random? 