>>35427040That was a really nice read anon. Love how the tail is used, I can imagine the Palkyrie moving around and doing all those things with it, he makes me think of a ghibli movie character somehow. Opening the tent flaps, carrying the twigs, being grabbed, he's like extra animated, lots of fun. Great environment descriptions, the aurora explanation was like I was there. And I'm a sucker for those two characters' dynamic, especially Milphy re-asserting control by explaining his culture, that was just great kek.
I can see why Euterpe said what she said, at points.Also, the AI is pretty good! It's not immediately obvious which is which at all... I feel like the AI used the expression "racing heart" more than you would, is that possible? I imagine the AI wouldn't lay out worldbuilding information in the text, so those parts are probably all yours. Based on your comments, I also have the impression that some of the lewder turns of phrase might be the AI's work. Here are some sentences I think might have been the AI:
https://pastebin.com/hN9UuRVkIf a significant portion of the story was written with it, I'm pretty impressed with the tool.
Also, I really loved this sentence: "I like to think he was trying to convey his feelings rather than just reality. Maybe that's how he planted the wanderlust in me." It's just... Great. Feels like something someone would say about their father.
