>>69300890I thought the WataBota one was super cute. You were to quickly demonstrate the essence of Watame's optimism that helps her persevere while also trying to put others first. Botan also growing to know that there's more to life than money was also a good touch. For what it's worth, I think how that one progressed is pretty on par. I've known a few people who were just a check to be sent to their fathers, and the attempt to reconnect later like that, expecting to just be re-accepted into their lives, but they're nothing more than a stranger when someone who actually cares steps into their lives.