>>77962174Glad that this is here to sink my teeth into. It was a very entertaining read. The exchanges with Botan have good bite to them, and I really enjoyed the simmering intensity of the Amelia part of the story.
Found a small typo “But no, I’m calm at all. - I think this is missing a "not" in there. The plot presentation is really good and your music choices are top notch. I can't wait to see more. Sorry if I don't have anything more detailed or profound to say, it's still early in the morning for me, but it was a good way to start waking up.
Checking out your rentry makes me feel absolutely small in comparison, due to the sheer quality and range of works you deliver with expert craft. It's both an inspirational and a little intimidating, but I'll keep doing my best with that as one of my measuring sticks. 