>>29561724Ha, him picking fights with the pregnancy fetish girl who writes porn from work. Come at me!
>>29561655Speaking of porn… I read your story! Firstly, I really enjoyed your setup with a lost traveler in need of help being scooped up and taken in by the cultists. Personally my favorite idea for Luxuria taking in new people and indoctrinating them is exactly this— rather than people who willingly enter like political officials or researchers, it’s people who are brought in and wholly unable to leave whether because they owe their safety and lives to the cultists or because maybe they know the only other outcome is death. I enjoy the juxtaposition of altruism and helping a stranger and poisonous indoctrination. Also fucking based taste describing Koemi as chubby with big areolas and a nice bush… peak performance. The only thing I’d say is that, like you alluded to with them being caught, sex outside of breeding rituals is an extreme rarity (and likely even outright forbidden) for lots of girls due to the meticulous routine and scheduling of said rituals, but seeing as Rudolf is an outsider unaware of the customs, I wouldn’t say it makes the story “non canon” or anything. Realistically I would say that Rudolf or Koemi (or even both) would have been killed for this incident, with a little more leeway for the latter if the elders are going off the assumption that she could be pregnant. Really good work!!
