>>48479461Hmm, I see what you are saying. I was going to scrap half of it anyway, I might as well scrap the whole thing and try again. I think I've always had an exposition problem. I manage to avoid characters giving lore or exposition dumps but I end up doing it through the narration, always. If I mix it up things might become a bit more interesting. I already have some ideas, it's only a shame that it takes me so long to write.
