>>11817847Anon you are filtering me in a way I didn't even know was possible. It looks like you can't decide if pander to lolicons that are into kusogakis or coomers that love huge tits, you can't have both. Saw take two and I like the proportions way more on that one. I'll go a little heavy on you because I can see mistakes that I've made. First, straight lines on character reference sheets are a MUST, believe me, it will save you a lot of time and probably a headache. Don't follow the anatomy of the picture to a tee since I just used it to illustrate my point. I feel like the head is too big, the heights between your 3 sketches don't make sense at all, side profile is completely fucked and head should be more forward, again, use a straight line if you need. As other anons said, pretty generic and overdone concept, easier to get lost in the sea of vtuanon, give us something that we can remind you with besides blond slut with horns because theres millions of those in the vtuber tag, reminds me a lot of La Signora from Genshin Impact. But honestly the most important tip and criticism I can give you is to not listen too much to other anons, at least in your creative decisions. Don't change your stupid asymmetrical sock if you don't want to, make something (you) are going to love and something you would want to see, is the same with content. Take things you would like to see and bring them to life, have soul. I believe in you anon.