Good morning, everyone. I see Alice has acquired a taste for blood.
>>27673770>smut rantBased. Good luck drilling that into these anons' heads, given the quality of the horny posting I've seen in this thread.
I finally read your story, by the way! Sorry I didn't read it last night as promised, Fuuchan kept streaming so long I went to sleep before he finished. Your scene building is quite good! Your vague descriptions of robes and a tent do make me wonder, did you have any particular ideas in mind for Kindred architecture and fashion? I was going to make the Holy Kingdom's architecture a haphazard mash-up of Sengoku Japan and Vatican City. The outer edges of the kingdom would be in a more Greco-Roman style, influenced by the architecture of the Empire as a whole, but as you approach Akuma Castle things gradually get more Japanese. The last Kindred I consulted about this abandoned me without replying so I never did get an actual Kindred's opinion on it.
>flowersI was going to make Japanese camellias the Holy Kingdom's national flower, since those are the smaller red/white flowers decorating Vox's haori. Make use of that knowledge how you will for future stories. Coincidentally, while I know you just chose those colors because they're Vox's colors, if we do assume the flowers decorating the tent were camellias, the flower language would be quite fitting. Red for passionate love, white for waiting. I don't believe purple camellias have an agreed upon meaning in hanakotoba, but I've seen it represent devotion in other flower languages. Very much the kind of flower language that would be used amongst a cult patiently waiting for the day their god returns to make them all his concubines.