>>16595631Not that anon, this is only my own suggestion piece, sorry for the redlining ...
I suggest to colour (but I see you already did that for the ears and irises lineart) some part like the innerside of the upper eyelashes "bright salmon pinkish" and the main face features like chin, mouth and nose linearts so that it feels more "lively"
Still
I think you are doing an amazing job tho, kind artist anon !
Hope they pay you adeguately for your work