>>11488411>>11489671Hoo, boy. Well done, anon! I'm grossed out. Like, it took a little bit to get to the 'fun' part, and for a moment I almost forgot what I was reading. Until I got to the last paragraph, that is!
So I'm gonna spoiler my feedback so no one has to read it that doesn't want to.
“Fubuki, in America it’s illegal to defecate in public so please go in my mouth so you won’t get in trouble.”
I pissed myself laughing, dude. I'm not gonna critique it like a normal story because it's clearly just a little shitpost - literally - that you tried to have fun with for the sake of another anon.
So, normally I try to put myself into the mindset of this fic's intended audience in order to deliver better feedback, but this time I can't imagine what goes through a scatfag's mind and I don't really want to, either. No offense scatfag, if you read this.
Kudos to you, anon, for delivering on a fic no one else wanted to. It didn't quite put me off my food, though - this sushi is delicious.>>11489866Sorry. Still, I think it's better than unironically saying "you-know-who" or "he-who-shall-not-be-named" like we're channeling fucking Harry Potter.
Pic unrelated.
