>>51509763Finally got to reading through this. I thought the dynamic and banter with Kiara was pretty fantastic. The smut was decent, the oral play was pretty nice, we sometimes don't get enough cunnilingus. I think I enjoyed the morning after most of all. It was pretty authentic for that type of experience. It's true not all of them end with another date like that, but it was incredibly cute how Kiara and Anon warmed up to each other that way. Like other anons said, give your grammar and formatting a few more lookovers and your future works will be sailing smooth.
