>>98913055I'm so happy to hear you're interested.
I'll start digging a little deeper into dialogue in the next chapters. It's going to be a kind of slow crescendo where each chapter gets more energetic than the last and I have specific stops that are going to be better opportunities for Choco and the girls to really interact about them and what's happening.
I'm really glad you're giving it a chance because I'm not very adept at this kind of story. I will do my best with it. It won't be too long, five chapters at most.