>>755162It sounds pretty forced desu. Most Vtubers use a fake/dramatised voice but the main issue with yours sounds like you're struggling to keep it going, like it's straining your throat to force out the pitch. That being said it isn't bad, your voice kind of fits a princess like pic related, and the way you punctuate your words and drag the syllables makes you sound like a character in an after-school program for younger kids.
Are you aiming for a particular character? And if so, maybe you should provide a voice sample with some dialogue to read out relating to said character type.