>>83316074I think you need to talk with beta readers. Like straight up I think your problem is that you need someone to bounce your ideas off of that won't spoil it to your intended audience. Your prose is great, and you have the basis of a cool setting right there. Your real problem really does seem to lie in not knowing where to go next for your plots. So I think you need to start asking the beta reader emails if they want to bounce ideas while trading beta reading, or post your email to fish for beta readers willing to bounce plot points off of,
That original ending picture just makes me imagine this becoming a shitpost where the joke at the end is that there is no joke just the infinite love of christ washing over all ala christian kirbo. If you're still taking suggestions for the Ame wip,
I think a way to fix the "Our Ame killed other Ame's parents" coming out of nowhere is by having it be hinted earlier. Maybe by way of a contextless flashback that implied Ame killed her own parents that's later run through again with more context, or something similar in order to drop the hint earlier.>>83316507For context you might want to put the 'altered ending' at the very end/ in a rentry link just to make sure future thread readers don't get lost on what we're talking about right now.
