>>75597759In this world, they're all humans. If I may say something a bit blasphemous and obscene, I'm not imagining them with ears or tails. This is a human story.
>sora eatingthat's a good idea. I never really thought to do that though I can definitely see some ways I can apply something like that in the future. I attempted to try an show don't tell her inability to read at the beginning though i'm not sure if it landed.
>first hurdle is overcome a little too cleanly.fair enough. Luckily there will be many hurdles to come though. I'll try to make her work for them a bit more, especially with literacy and writing.
>another good point is that Sora and Botan feel like they have some substance to their personalities, so nice going.I'm happy to hear that. I've been on a bit of a Botan bender lately and since Sora is my oshi, I think they can make for a great combo with each other. I'm going to see if I can watch a bit more Wata as well since she and Botan are like peanut butter and jelly.
Thank you for reading it mate. Appreciate it. This is a story well outside my wheelhouse so, at least as far as the military aspect goes, it may be a bit hit and miss at times.
